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Post  Shattered Dreamer on Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:02 am

Yeah so...this is about that guy I like again. Just wrote it a couple minutes ago...it's not that good so I'd love anything you think should be changed. Thanks for reading. Smile



Maybe…..

You pass by me in the hall
Not noticing my well brushed hair
Or fresh perfume
You’re oblivious to it all

No matter what I do
You’re always on my mind
But I guess
You’re oblivious to that too

Maybe if I was twice as skinny
Ten times as pretty
And not always so sad
Maybe then you’d like me

If I was always upbeat and happy
Never did I cry
If I danced ballet
Never asking you why
Maybe then that’d be the day
You ‘d be my guy

If I was silent, not always
Blurting things out
If I followed you all days
Never with a pout
Maybe then you’d look to my face
And tell me you loved me
With no doubt

Maybe if my bones stronger
If my clothes were more revealed
Maybe if my legs were longer
And my emotions more concealed
Or maybe, if I was just like her
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Post  Mileythesmiley on Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:13 am

aaaaw.
That was great!
Absolutely brilliant! ^_^
You're really good. (:

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Post  Shattered Dreamer on Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:15 am

Thank youu! =]
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Post  Tanita (: on Mon Apr 07, 2008 12:22 pm

:O
That was...
I'm speechless.

That was brilliant!
So not copying Maria!
haha
=D
But it is.
AMAZING!(:
Really, it is.

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