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Post  Mileythesmiley on Sun Mar 30, 2008 10:45 am

This is my newest poem,
which sort of turned out to be a mini-S/A. xD
I hope you like it.


From the day they met,
from their very first words.
They got off on the wrong foot
and everything made it worse.

She drives him crazy,
he makes her mad.
They hate each other.
That’s a fact!

He teases her.
She ignores his smirk.
They fight over small things.
She mutters ‘jerk!’

But as they’ve convince themselves
they loathe each other’s guts,
they’ll never know what real feelings
they keep shut.

Every time he’s on the road
and sleeps around with girls.
He can’t stop thinking of what she’ll say
and why his mind is twirled.

And while her body’s in her lover’s arms,
her mind is somewhere else.
She wonders if he regrets his act.
She wants him by herself.

The days they keep on coming.
They still hide what they feel.
Why can’t love be a simple thing?
Why’s love such a huge deal?

One day he could not take anymore.
He had to tell her soon.
He had to have her by his side
and knew exactly what to do.

The next day on their common job
he took hold of both her hands.
He told her how she made him feel
he wanted her to understand.

As he looked into her eyes
her heart began to melt.
She had no clue of what to say,
so showed him how she felt.

She let go of his hands
and slid her own around his waist.
She pressed her lips against his, softly,
he thawed in her embrace.

A lesson is learned
from watching these two;
You never know who loves you,
take a chance and do!

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Re: Take a chance.

Post  Jordan[: on Sun Mar 30, 2008 11:01 am

Holy crap.
That was amazing.
:O
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Re: Take a chance.

Post  Mileythesmiley on Sun Mar 30, 2008 11:02 am

Jordiee wrote:
Holy crap.
That was amazing.
:O
Thank you, Jordie!
Razz
<3

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Post  Tanita (: on Sun Mar 30, 2008 11:03 am

Mariaaaaaaaaaaa!!
That was amazing!
Wow.
You have to write more poems!
Very Happy<3
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Post  Mileythesmiley on Sun Mar 30, 2008 11:05 am

Tanita Sad wrote:
Mariaaaaaaaaaaa!!
That was amazing!
Wow.
You have to write more poems!
Very Happy<3
thankyouthankyouthankyou.
<3
I'll start write more when I'm done with my story, I think.

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Post  Julesbox. on Sun Mar 30, 2008 11:27 am

Brilliant WOMAN! WRITE MORE POEMSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
That was awesome, truly. Seriously. Holy shieet. Ahaha.

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Post  Shattered Dreamer on Thu Apr 03, 2008 8:40 pm

Wow, that was amazing! I loved it!!!
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