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Post  Mileythesmiley on Sun Mar 02, 2008 2:49 am

Here's another one of my poems. ^_^
It's not that good, but I like it.

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I hate your smile.
I canít take how you laugh.
I donít like your smell.
Your humor makes me daft.
I hate how you fix your hair
and how I try making you see,
but the thing I hate the most
is how you donít even care.

Because;
At me, your smile will never be faced.
Itíll never be me to make you laugh.
Iím not the reason you put on your aftershave
and Iíll never be the one youíll try and impress.
For me, you will never do your hair
and wonít make me notice
although I do,
but you donít even care.

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Post  Julesbox. on Sun Mar 02, 2008 2:51 am

RIIIE! What are you talking about?!

It's seriously WICKEDLY AWESOME! Very Happy

I love it, like Łber-much! <3

WRITE MORE! XD
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Post  Mileythesmiley on Sun Mar 02, 2008 2:53 am

thank you, Juju.
Razz
I'm working on some more at the minute,
but I want them to be better, so
it might take a while.
but thank yooou
<3

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Post  Julesbox. on Sun Mar 02, 2008 2:55 am

Can't wait! Very Happy

<333
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Post  Tanita (: on Sun Mar 02, 2008 5:52 am

:O
I love it Maria!
This is really good.
It's exactly how I feel with my crushhhhhh.
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You are an amaizing writer!=D
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Post  Mileythesmiley on Sun Mar 02, 2008 5:54 am

thank you!
<3

yeah, that was sort of my inspiration.
When you like someone, but they don't feel the same. ^_^

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Post  Shattered Dreamer on Mon Apr 07, 2008 4:41 pm

This is exactly how I feel about the guy I'm like in love with.
Awesome poem, I LOVE it!!!!
I can't wait to read more of your's!
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