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Post  Mileythesmiley on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:11 am

Tell me why you're always on my mind.
Tell why you don't feel the same.
Tell me what to do, what to say
and what to wear when you're around.
Tell me where to find your heart and how to win it.
Tell me your secrets.
Tell me. Tell me.


Random fact: When I wrote this, I actually thought it rhymed.
It wasn't until I was done, I realised it didn't. >_>

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Post  Jordan[: on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:17 am

DUDE!
Shocked
That's amazing <3
I love it. Very Happy
And poems don't have to rhyme... Do they?
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Post  Mileythesmiley on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:18 am

xxJordanxx wrote:
DUDE!
Shocked
That's amazing <3
I love it. Very Happy
And poems don't have to rhyme... Do they?
aaaw, thank you so much.
and no, they don't.
but I intended to with this one,
without luck. xD

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Post  Jordan[: on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:20 am

Haha yeah I attempt too, and I'll be like
AHA! IT RHYMES!
Then I read it. -.-
Hahaha
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Post  Mileythesmiley on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:22 am

Yeah. xD
I think I want to write one nooooow. ^_^

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Post  Jordan[: on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:25 am

Miley wrote:
Yeah. xD
I think I want to write one nooooow. ^_^

Haha I can only write at night, or when I'm feeling really depressed -.-
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Post  Tanita (: on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:26 am

This is amaizing!Very Happy
I wish I could write as good as you and Jordan-.-

I really like it!(:
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Post  Mileythesmiley on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:28 am

thank you!! Very Happy
You can just try. You'll getter better with time
That's how I started,
and I still suck. XD
seriously, a few days ago I found my first poem I made about two years ago, and it was crap! Like a gigantic monster poo!

ahaha.

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Post  Tanita (: on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:30 am

You don't suck!
You're really good!
Believe me,
I've tried for years.
I'm just not a poetic person I guess.
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Post  Jordan[: on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:33 am

You don't suck!
You'd know if you did.
Cos see, you wouldn't actually be able to write a poem if you sucked.
haha
Plus I'd have told you, even if I've only known you for a day.
I am... ehm... rudely blunt. Rolling Eyes
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Post  Mileythesmiley on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:34 am

aaaaw.
Now you make me smile. Razz
THAAAAAAANK YOOOOOU! *heart heart*

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Post  Jordan[: on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:42 am

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Post  Julesbox. on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:47 am

MARIAAAAAA! I loved ittt! Shocked Like big time! <3

You have to write more! Very Happy

Seriously wicked...I still can't get over it! Haha

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Post  Mileythesmiley on Wed Feb 20, 2008 1:40 pm

AAAAAAAAAWWW!!!
Thank yoooooou! Very Happy

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Post  Mia-xx on Wed Feb 20, 2008 2:08 pm

I LOVE it!!!!! It's really amazing!!
And stop all that 'I'm not good' thingy, 'cause we all know it isn't true dx you're really, REALLY good!!! xD
- I remember the first poem dx damn that made me laugh., it wasn't that bad, I just found it really funny xD
AND IT RHYMED affraid xD

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Post  Shattered Dreamer on Thu Apr 03, 2008 9:15 pm

wow...I love this poem, i can totally connect to it. -sigh-
great job!!!
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